I think I like the composition of the second one better but are you actually hoping to get feedback on singing or the song composition? Here is a piece I am writing for someone.
I was hoping to get a feedback on the composition I know my voice isn't that good thanks for the feedback. You have a nice voice though!! needs some instruments
You guys are pretty good at it. There is a specialty group somewhere around us, I heard that showcases talents like you guys' and lets everyone else appreciate it. That way, you can even keep on practicing your skills and groom it and at the same time make some really good listeners too.
legal Query for married nepali girl now have taken US citizenship
Got my F1 reinstatement approved within 3 months(was out of F1 for almost 2 years)
2020 : Why No Trump !
#MAGA#FAFO is delicious
TPS of Nepal to be automatically extended for 6 months based on South Sudan decision
Democrat lies revealed
Nepal TPS decision
Has anyone here successfully reinstated to F-1 status after a year-long gap following a drop from F-1?
TPS Sakiyo Tara Case is in Court.
Medication from Nepal to USA
Supreme Court allows Trump to end TPS for Venezuelans
Genuine Question.... Why so many folks still in TPS after 10 years. Is the statistics wrong?
Business Ideas in Nepal?
Any input on remote jobs(IT related or Sales or Marketing)?
Nepal Likely to Get 60-Day TPS Notice
TPS cancel bho bhane k garne?
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